Open Poetry #30 |
Softly Steal Mine Heart |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wouldst thou comest now to softly steal mine heart? And once upon a time when thou hast stolen mine heart, wouldst thou also givest to me an everlasting and eternal love? Wouldst thou let me see thy love shining from thine heart? Wouldst thou look deeply into mine eyes and see the love that shineth from mine soul? Wouldst thou let me love thee for an eternity? Wouldst thou please comest now..... and softly steal mine heart? (slightly revised) How can love just stop? Somebody tell me, help me understand... {Trace Adkins} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-23-2004 10:09 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very tender. So good to see you posting more frequently! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Just trying to get on with things Kari...hugs and thanks. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Very tender and touching. Enjoyed! SG |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
awwww sweet sister...touching but you know that right? beautiful ~*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
A beautiful write my friend. Thou flows with the tranquility from thine hearts brim. An astonishing piece beautifully placed together. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love it! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a beautiful tender offer thank you for sharing the gentleness of your heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is precious, sweet friend, may your heart forever glow with warmth and joy of love and be stolen only with care! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, swet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
So tenderly penned...love it Charisma |
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