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Open Poetry #30

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titch k
Member

since 2003-11-25

Posts 123

0 posted 2003-11-28 04:02 PM

If a child says to you
he will fail, say to him,
''Poor restless dove,
flap those wings of thine;
Be prepared to fly;
Careless of form or face,
where autumn's leaves
are lying; All excellence
amounts to just being''

The Gods ever present
between here and nowhere
With tendencies transformed
bringing you ever nearer;
Even the sun and moon
grow, from dappled edge;
Without risk coaxing
between rain drops;
Walking on water !

Titch

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-11-28 05:13 PM

Titch,
The rain drops sort of blurred the view, Though I enjoyed the read.

titch k
Member

since 2003-11-25

Posts 123

2 posted 2003-11-28 06:19 PM

hi seymour
so glad you did..smile
i write with a depth my friend, always a hidden philosophical twist...SMILE
Hence the raindrops..to clarify that all is as one, and raindrops dance, whatever, perceived...as are...
Thankyou so much for reading
love Titch

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