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Open Poetry #30

The Merging of Souls

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2004-01-22 11:13 PM

In the light
    two hearts may meet
    a soul's kiss
    tender and sweet

In the night
    two minds take rest
    longing touch
    as souls confess

In their plight
    two souls end quest
    merge to one
    in love's success

One's outlook can be another's expression.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

1 posted 2004-01-22 11:17 PM

Yes!!! That's what it's all about! I just haven't able to say it as well as you have done in this write, and I'm keeping this one! The Merging of Souls, complete. ~K~

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2004-01-22 11:20 PM

Most wonderful thoughts!!!!
Enjoyed this!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-01-23 02:01 AM

beautiful

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-01-23 11:45 PM

you do this so well, just blissful
i could almost hear you whispering this

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-01-23 11:53 PM

ctowen -- this was very lovely!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2004-01-23 11:55 PM

very well done...marvelous form...great write

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