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Open Poetry #30

echoless away

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2004-01-22 09:42 PM

Words came from my lips
but I heard no sound.
The wind carried them
echoless away.

I felt my hair flow
a ghost of the past...
when will you return
or will you too fly
echoless away

absence is your sword
That cuts in me deep
ghosts words echo not
echoless away

Juju----

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-01-23 04:36 AM

.....this is soft, but sad...

very nice

Laoha
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since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

2 posted 2004-01-23 04:59 AM

"ghosts words echo not
echoless away"

This is a very fresh way of describing it!

http://mypaper.pchome.com.tw/news/laoha1986/

http://www.chinapoet.net/cgi-bin/forums.cgi?forum=35

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-01-23 12:55 PM

kind of sad

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-01-23 01:35 PM

JuJu~
This is just wonderful !!!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2004-01-23 07:32 PM

I am pleased you like my poem!
(:

Juju

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-03-27 04:22 AM

Juju, this was such a tender write.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

7 posted 2004-04-27 05:22 PM

oh thank you, sorry fore the delay.
Love juju

cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

8 posted 2004-05-02 10:45 AM

Juju this a lovely poem said in so few words. I really liked it. Maggie

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

9 posted 2005-01-20 07:08 PM

thank you Maggie

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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