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For 'Tis No Sin |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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For 'Tis No Sin ~*Marge Tindal*~ Grace me face me with your smile haven't been there for a while find me bind me then unwind me breathe me in for 'tis no sin to long to be with you~ *Re-Pub from the Post ... errrr, Re-Post from the Pub~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I really enjoyed this one Margie. Hugs. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Awesome. I loved it!!!!!!!! And it's so true! Love, Terri~  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
My...what did the lady sip of at the Pub? Cute write Marge, made me chuckle.. |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
The arms that bind the mind is peaceful thoughts of love ponder the mystery surrounding your smile. Lovely poem, my friend, you do a great romantic piece! I am ever amazed at your talent. Sparticus |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Margie girl. Glad you brought it on over from the pub to share with us! ~Holiday Hugs~ ~ To love and be loved |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge Good one, enjoyed.  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
oh my! I love this! I think I'm going to go about what I need to for awhile now so that THIS is what stays in my mind, because it made me smile, and I don't do that much... thanks  Always, Alyssa PS, mind if I keep this in my library? good! He was a man of sorrows |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Hi Marge; Enjoyed this! Thanks for the link! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
hello Marge, I loved the short lines and the way the poem flowed....A fun and easy read! "Tis No Sin'.....I felt a friend within! Nice job pictureme |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Glad you re-posted this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
tis no sin but it sure feels like it sometimes, doesn't it? |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A beautiful jewel of a keeper this is!! hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Well said! Thank you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
No, it's no sin, dear Marge, it's a divine desire! Beautiful! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Marge, This one put a smile on my face... I love it. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis Sweet and from the heart you are, always!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ I have so many reasons to be thankful for being a poetess ... you all rank HIGH on the list~ Sharing this little Cherokee heart is a full-time job ... and I LOVE IT~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
"Grace me face me with your smile haven't been there for a while" I really like these lines Marge, and with the rest of the write added on. It gives me a feeling of "undefeated love". Real nice write. Enjoyed it. poe If nothing is something |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
As always a treat to read dear lady  Charisma |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
everyone else took all the good stuff to say...i liked it though We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies. Dimmu Borgir |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Marge, this is wonderful in many, many ways. Enjoyed this so much I am going back for another read. Patricia |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
No truer words could be written... You are a wonder in your own right. TD |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so beautiful. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
The only sin is to be away so long and not be able to read your gems. Enjoyed! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ I so appreciate each kind read and reply~ It is a wonderful day to be a poetess~ Thank you ALL for holding my hand in this poetic circle~ EagleOne~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope not...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
for 'tis no sin to long to be with you~ This is lovely, Marge. *S* If sin it is Then I shall sin For yearn I do So deep within If sin it is Then I'll confess For yearn I will Till final rest. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I'm glad you brought this here -- I don't go to the Pub, and I'd have missed it. Letting your sweetness show here, and that's good to see. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed reading this, Marge.  Hugs Ethel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you everyone~ A simple little piece of my heart~ SweetSuthernGal~ How beautiful your feelings~ Thank you for sharing with me~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Indeed it isn't. Well said, my friend! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ed~ Bless you, my friend~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I like this Betty |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Realllllllly sweet read PoetFriendMarge... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You ALL amaze me in your graciousness~ And I am thankful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
This is to the point and one of the best poems i've read. Thanks! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling... I'm glad this was brought back to the forefront. |
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chrissydome Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 73germany |
beautiful! turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marge, I know that I've already replied to this, but this is so pretty it should be framed!! There is so much said in these sweet words. Hugs, Ethel |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Thirty-three words! I'm amazed at the depth you reach in so few words! All was incredible-the sound, rhythm, and thought. Thank you for sharing. Sadelite |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I almost missed this beauty Marge, glad it was bumped again. Knuffels, Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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