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PazSqual
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0 posted 2004-01-22 11:26 AM



The Sum of My Fears

I am a very patient person
Very few things concern me
If I add up all my fears
The thing I fear the most is
The reversion to what once was

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-01-22 11:33 AM


Well said, and very well written.  Welcome to Passions, I hope you enjoy your stay here.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-01-22 11:36 AM


PazSqual
Welcome and a good intro.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-01-22 12:30 PM


I wish I could say that...I need what once was...

great piece

Terrina
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since 2003-12-31
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4 posted 2004-01-22 12:33 PM


I'm not ready to let go of what once was. But you have put things into perspective
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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5 posted 2005-03-08 12:32 PM


I couldn't comment on this at the time...
But somehow you have stepped inside the walls that you once built as a fortress...only to find the same insecurities within.
You speak to me.
TD

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