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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-01-22 07:36 AM


I came out of that morning, that improbable day of delight, filled with confused happy thoughts and exhileration, head spining, heart beating, pounding, blood rushing, racing, so much so my memory and basic functions failed.

Sleepless and lonely, till our next call, but more relaxed and warm after our words of intimacy, words filed with respect, words of the deepest, hottest love, ever expressed between man and woman.
These calming, tranquil waters on a white yacht named ''Eternal Love'' we have sailed.

Bluest of oceans and the gentlest of waves stand between us, but with the biggest leap of faith, i will traverse and encompass the distance, with a heart full of gladness and love unencombered.

Free will is what i have, and with all of my heart, and all of my senses burning with fire, all of my glorious passion, i bestow it to you, in the gentlest of ways, like the soft spring rain, breeze blown and warm on your face.
The sound of our love will be like the light liqiud lapping of a glistening lake, washing on a shingle shoreline, to me you will never be forgotten, but in my mind forever, always remembered.

In the garden of my mind you sit bathed in sunlight, surrounded by my sweet scented Jasmine, and Roses of velvet that flurrish and grow towards your radiant light.

Contented you are in my bower, gently touching and smell scenting the crisp white roses, your face a picture of delight.
Your love, life, happiness and future, will be nourished and nurtured by me, and i hope never to be away from your sight.


''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-01-22 08:07 AM


Goldenrose
Now that's a confession worth taking note of.
Enjoyed

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2004-01-22 09:13 AM


Thank you very much for your kind words Mr Tabin...glad you enjoyed the poem...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2004-01-24 12:05 PM


This was more beautiful than all the colors of the rainbow~

Thank You~

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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