Open Poetry #30 |
Tsk Tsk |
Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Tsk Tsk I should have know, that this love would never last. But again was blind, and got my self in a bind. Tsk Tsk I went on loving you, for a bit to long. broken and free, I'm still just me. Why do I wonder, why? How come I seem to cry. At the drop of a pen. Now the time has flown by. and I'm wondering when. I'll fall in love again, sometime soon. I don't you, running, the show anymore. I'll make out fine. Love, |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
The despair of lost love is clear here, except for a missong word or two in the stanza below: what did you want to say after I don't you? I'll fall in love again, sometime soon. I don't you, running, the show anymore. I'll make out fine. Be well and enjoy your holidays [This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-28-2003 11:15 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kellie, You do and did well. |
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