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Poetic Child
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0 posted 2004-01-22 05:00 AM



"Strange Feelings"

Ever feel weird, and want to think your crazy
But you don't you just look at it all hazy
Your feelings for something are really strong
And you wonder if its going to last that long
It could be about a girl, or something else strange
But then you think about it, it comes into range
Then you think, do i act on it, or let it stay
but you gotta do what you gotta do, and not leave it that way.

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Neeraja
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1 posted 2004-01-22 06:32 AM


A nice tribute !  

Welcome Poetic Child!

Neeraja

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2 posted 2004-01-22 06:44 AM



A good entrance into our world of Passions in Poetry!  Welcome, and I hope you become comfortable in your new poet's home.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Michelle_loves_Mike
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3 posted 2004-01-22 09:09 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS
good first write
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

KristieSue
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4 posted 2004-01-22 09:17 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!


"Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci

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5 posted 2004-01-22 09:39 AM


Hi, and Welcome to Passions we are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

please check your email for a special greeting


Kindly

Greeneyes~

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In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

richard taylor
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6 posted 2004-01-22 11:25 AM


good first post.
regards richard.

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