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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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0 posted 2004-01-21 10:22 PM




Art By Bonnie J
Woman In Black

Come into my web of intrigue.
Let me spin you a tale.
Let the wind with her long fingers beckon you into the unknown.
Darkness fills the chilled air of midnight.
In the shadows a woman wrapped in a
hooded cloak of black moves as if she were a sheer wisp of smoke.
Listening-
You only hear the sounds of the lonely night
and the tapping of heels that echo into the silence of darkness.
She melds into the black shadows of darkness as if they were one.
You try to see beyond the cape and only see shadows
and invisible plains of blackness.
A faint flash of perfume invades your nostrils.
A gentle touch of the wind or is it the brush of hand that touches your heart on this chilling winter night?
Standing frozen in time
You watch as the apparition disappears into the swirling mist.
The only sound to be heard is the tap, tap, tap of heels echoing into theelusive darkness
of
shadows after midnight.

Love Bon-Bon


© Copyright 2004 Bonnie j - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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1 posted 2004-01-21 10:24 PM


This is very cool!!!!  I like poetry like this very much!!!  Love the images!!!!
Take Care,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


J.Samm
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since 2004-01-12
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Iloilo City, Philippines
2 posted 2004-01-21 10:39 PM


wow! you have taken me somewhere, i could just see them all...
LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-01-22 07:20 AM


Bonnie, your outstanding...this captures the essense of the beauty of your heart mind and soul....not to mention the creative talent you possess...excellent write and the pic...wow!!!  Thanks dear lady for sharing your works of art...brilliant, and I mean that in more ways then one...hugs and smiles.  Love Me
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2004-01-22 06:03 PM


GirlFriend !!!
Me smile BIG ... you're a quick study ... way to go~
I am so pleased to see this beauty with the graphic to help tell your poignant story~

Love ya~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

muted
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5 posted 2004-01-22 06:07 PM


i havent seen you write something "darker" like this! i love it!
very descriptive....

much enjoyed (very much)

garysgirl
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6 posted 2004-01-22 06:11 PM


Bon-Bon, I'm so glad that you put this on here. I loved it when you sent it to me in e-mail and I love it now!!

Did you get my new e-mail address from MSN?
Hugs,
Ethel

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