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2writeis2be
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0 posted 2004-01-21 04:18 PM


I’d do something if I weren’t so cranky so sad so tired so faded so lost so weary Could go out if I weren’t so scared so resistant so anxious so helpless so dispirited
Would try if I weren’t so edgy so insecure so negative so obsessive I’d be alright if I weren’t so confused so miserable so
depressed


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1 posted 2004-01-21 04:21 PM



That's getting it out, Lisa!

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2 posted 2004-01-21 05:04 PM


..you're gonna get stronger with every word...

its nice to meet you

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3 posted 2004-01-21 06:39 PM


Been there, too...
But this is a good way to get it out.

Always, Alyssa

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...I am a girl of tears.

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4 posted 2004-01-21 08:23 PM


Good to let it out, and lay it down!!!!
May it fly away!!!!
Good write!!!!
Bridgette

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5 posted 2004-01-21 08:58 PM


whew! that was quite a write! don't you just feel better now?

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6 posted 2004-01-21 09:40 PM


Lisa~
A wonderful word-balm ... WELCOME to PiP~
You're just gonna love it here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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2writeis2be
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7 posted 2004-01-22 09:04 AM


I'm not THAT depressed...I just like writing depressing stuff cuz it comes easier for me. Spose it's due to me being a more negative person than positive.

But thanks for liking it!

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