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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2004-01-21 02:07 PM


TWENTY OR LESS…#184

Copyright 2004 by:MARK V SHELDON


PEOPLE

bound by history

fierce pride
competitive ancestors

green desire

littering insight and forethought
with national sweat


how incredibly unfortunate


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© Copyright 2004 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Iron Wolf
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1 posted 2004-01-21 02:08 PM


I really liked that, good job.
MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2004-01-21 02:11 PM


Thank you kindly, fellow poet...

-MVS

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http://educate-yourself.org/

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3 posted 2004-01-21 02:14 PM


(chuckling)
a bit of sarcastic insight....
I enjoyed Mark...


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4 posted 2004-01-21 02:15 PM


Again you have shared much in so few words..
very well done Mark.

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5 posted 2004-01-21 02:16 PM


OHHHH SOOOOO SOOOOO True!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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6 posted 2004-01-21 02:18 PM


Smart write this is!! Enjoyed. Chris

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With a thousand hearts."


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7 posted 2004-01-21 02:29 PM


Well done Mark...
another into my 'Mark-20' fplder!
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

MARK V SHELDON
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8 posted 2004-01-21 02:33 PM


Actually, sadly cynical, Ron...  Wish I could find the idealism of youth again...

Thank you, Gentle Spirit.

Yes, Bridgette, unfortunately...

Thanks Chris.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2004-01-21 02:35 PM


to you, my Lady.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

juliet_2u
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10 posted 2004-01-21 08:17 PM


Wow, been a long time my old friend...was a pleasure reading you again.
Jules

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11 posted 2004-01-21 11:55 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Mark, this is so sad but true, sweet friend, the world is falling in the whole wrong direction as idealism is what makes the world go round and sacrificing it all and the power of youth is what creates the gray clouds! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

MARK V SHELDON
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12 posted 2004-01-22 03:13 AM


Hi Jules -- thanks for your warm reply.  Time has a way of blinking months into years...

Hey Noah -- gray clouds or chemtrails...???  Somewhere, there is hope...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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13 posted 2004-01-22 03:39 AM


nice
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