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Blue Sunlight |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Leaves skirt across the road skipping over curbs in a hurry where do they go in their rush I wonder. Scattered before my eyes perhaps it is natures way to clear the air surrounded by the beauty swept up in a taffeta gown. Blowing across the endless sky kicking up the wind gracing the morning painted blue in the sunlight. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this sounds like you were looking through the window on a quiet day, watching the gentle side of life dancing around....with a cup of cocoa! this was so pleasant..  "...and longed to kiss her hand an lie a thousand summers at her feet." ~excerpt A.L. Tennyson |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
swept up in a taffeta gown. ===================== how cool is that line!!!! love this ones blue reverie bluesygirl... everything looks better in blue dont it?  How foolish must man be, not to be impressed by mountains and trees |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
In blue, by the blue, on the blue, this is an azure treasure. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
skipping over curbs in a hurry where do they go in their rush I wonder. o i wonder i wonder i wonder who who wrote the book of love...... yea i wonder about those little guys too , so many daydreams as i try to track them on their way to wherever |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You have painted visions of blue as only you our lady of blue could ever do! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
As light and airy as the swirling leaves... ~C |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Leaves skirt across the road skipping over curbs in a hurry where do they go in their rush I wonder. Oh, how wonderful! Makes me wish it was fall instead of a land of winter white! hugs, Chris |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lovely, Lori I watched a tiny left behind leaf skip across the snow the other day, while I was shoveling..I was wondering how it must feel if it could feel, being so all alone and cold. Warm winter thoughts, Lori hugs M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful imagery, Lori..and I see just that when I look out the window, but couldn't have said it as pretty. Hugs! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Blowing across the endless sky kicking up the wind gracing the morning painted blue in the sunlight." Well, it's still below freezing here but the sun is bright and the sky is blue, so I'm not complaining...for today.  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
swept up in a taffeta gown I agree with JanetMarie...what a cool line...great imagery and great write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, the imagery made me smile, sweet friend, I can imagine all the leaves flying like herons across the sun, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
"Leaves skirt across the road" You can bring it along, I don't mind...heck, I'll even carry it for ya..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
what a lovely picture Lori~ there is so much peace within this....heart hugsssss  ~*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LOL... I was all caught up in your beautiful images... and know I had some magnificent comment all ready to type... then RL's response rocked coherent thought away in laughter. *S* This is lovely, Bluesy one... excellent write! *S* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
What a beautiful picture you painted in my mind, dear friend. This is so pretty, Lori!!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you everyone for reading. It means a lot to me...sincerely~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Loved the images, have seen and felt the same things you describe here......enjoyed _______ice ><> |
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