Open Poetry #30 |
Ode to the Weeping Willowed soul |
jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
Ode to the Weeping Willowed soul Take your strength from the willow tree. Dance upon the winds! The wind cannot break your soul. The Wind of change can only make you stronger as you grow. Grow from all your lessons of your struggled time. The winds today....I hope for you are only passing by. Some winds are gentle as they pass, Barely making an impression on our lives. Some winds take your breath away, making memories as they go. Some winds are bent on breaking us But take your strength from the Willow Assuredly, you have the strength Because as the willow tends to weep You never see one fall Ode to your very wise and weeping willowed soul. To my Brave internet friends Sassy and Luckie who recently faced family violence called for help and walked away with thier lives. They have a lot of healing left to do. Jennirey 2004 |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
so much wisdom, such powerful words. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
Very well put. So much strength and wisdom in this poem. There is alw |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Wow!! "You never see one fall Ode to your very wise and weeping willowed soul." I really enjoyed this write, I can't say that the above line stood out as the most captivating because they were all equally superior!!! Thank you! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very powerful and empowering write. This is extremely well done and lovely from your heart. Hugs. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Some winds are bent on breaking us But take your strength from the Willow Assuredly, you have the strength Because as the willow tends to weep You never see one fall The wind is only an element of nature that surely does test our will. I enjoyed your uplifting thoughts very much. Beautiful writing jennirey~ |
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richard taylor Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 136 |
I liked this very much indeed take care richard. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beautiful write, deep insight...I couldn't ask for more. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A beautiful poem with much strength in words and truth within...and for your friends, a prayer for their healing. M |
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