Open Poetry #30 |
Rain in the Morning |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
you got to bed And it is still clear As a bell outside In the middle of the night You roll over in bed Open your eyes For just one moment You put your ear to the window And you hear the rain Coming down softly outside And it slowly puts you back to sleep Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I know that feeling. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
and that is one of the best feelings! all curled up in the blanket listening to *patterings*....this is nice... |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Rain and slumber go very well together do they not :-) You did well the loner! Keep up the great work. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Julie, a very nice poem. Thank you for sharing your early morning rain. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh yes even I recognized these feelings....thank you for sharing your morning rain Charisma |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I love the rain. very well done Julie. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, those natural sounds are what sets me to sleep more peacefully than anything other, sweet friend, God Bless You, Mother Nature will be my wake-up call, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I love rain...nice Julie ~*~ |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
makes the whole world kin! well written. |
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