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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2004-01-20 10:40 PM


that morning I woke up fine
Went off with a friend
Watched a movie with my friends family
Then went home

When I got home
The pain had begun
How I hurt my back
I do not know

The pain has now lasted
For four whole days
But one good thing is
Some of the pain has eased

Back pains
They are no fun
Never do I want
Them ever again

Cold hands means a warm heart

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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-01-20 11:02 PM


Sorry your back hurts.  Get well soon!
ThunderMage
Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
2 posted 2004-01-20 11:29 PM


I've had it happen to me without hurting anything. The body can be as fickle a thing as the heart.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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