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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-01-20 09:32 PM

Pent up and chained
The heart sturdier than steel tether
Her call to him across inclement weather
Through fog an echo once persuaded
Until the glow of moon pervaded

Two shadows beat the twilight hills
Her eyes woke of his primal chills
The thrash of cruel imprisoned woes
Through fog illusions wintered snows
And tag became the spell of zeal

Together fast and furious heat
Astride by side and lightest feet
Through winter wail into the night
Untamed in free form soul delight
And howl at the moon

And far from harm the nights embrace
Together in a velvet place
Familiarized most noble prized
Entwined divined, and idolized
These spirits to transcend

As man and woman true to form
So pleasured this caress so warm
Two beings brought forth to be one
Enthralled the roar of rivers run
And howl at the moon

Copyright Kkh 1/20/04

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-01-20 09:49 PM

Kathleen -- I could visualize this! Wouldn't that be grand! Good poem.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2004-01-21 12:47 PM

And far from harm the nights embrace
Together in a velvet place
Familiarized most noble prized
Entwined divined, and idolized
These spirits to transcend.

That's my favorite verse, it's just so pretty.
Your entire poem is a beauty and sets the stage to dream!

I do love your poetic voice Kathleen!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-01-21 02:14 AM

"As man and woman true to form
So pleasured this caress so warm
Two beings brought forth to be one
Enthralled the roar of rivers run
And howl at the moon"

..this one had my little heart dancing... loved it!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-01-21 07:02 AM

And far from harm the nights embrace
Together in a velvet place
Familiarized most noble prized
Entwined divined, and idolized
These spirits to transcend

dark and beautiful, sensuous and heart quickening upon reading,
a little different in the dark, a nice
variation here

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2004-01-21 07:13 AM

"As man and woman true to form
So pleasured this caress so warm
Two beings brought forth to be one
Enthralled the roar of rivers run
And howl at the moon"

Spectacular! I loved this TD!

richard taylor
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 136

6 posted 2004-01-21 07:58 AM

This is very good I enjoyed the rhyme
regards Richard.

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