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NightWing |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
I come before thee wearing a tattered shield, Riddled in a commencement from distant fields; I fall upon thee to humble thy momentous grace, And behold before you my hearts missing space. You are the sky lit realms that rain over a glorious field, And the beacon of my cup from whence love spills. You are the covenant of each breath I take, And the resident that attributes to my ascendants fate. My love, you are the Nightwing that layeth in wait, And the forbearance of my hearts awaiting gate. It is in your hand that I give thee my being; It is in our embrace that unveils the sight to my souls seeing. Your love is a touch on the shoulder during life’s disarray, And a surrenderment of a compelling warmth that does not stray. Your love is the monument of a friendship in a heighten accolade, And a testimonial tribute of a kiss before a lovers midnight cascade. Give testament to me before thy feathers lair For my heart spoils in wait of the midnight night air I Look upon thee as my wingeth prey For I take lift within thy wings of thy hearts stay. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
*gasp* breathtaking...wow.. oh do keep the romance flowing....it makes for such a pleasant feeling!!  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Stunning.....wanted to echo muted with a *deep sigh* beautiful penned Charisma |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Your love is a touch on the shoulder during life’s disarray, And a surrenderment of a compelling warmth that does not stray. Your love is the monument of a friendship in a heighten accolade, And a testimonial tribute of a kiss before a lovers midnight cascade Jeff, this is soooo beautiful......you are a talented writer, my friend.  Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I must remember to breathe as I read your posts.  Extremely well done poet sir. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Simply breathtaking. This is the first time I have read your work, and I assure you, I will be looking for your words from this point forward. Still shaking my head in awe! Patricia |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Jeff Your words speak of a sacred love and romance that most of us can only dream about. Your words took me on a wonderful journey that I didn't want to end. This breathtaking piece would have to be my favourite of yours so far. I have no doubt that your words have set many hearts aflutter.  "The words of a poet can speak volumes 'tho no words are actually spoken. He has the ability to make a connection with the heart." Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ravenwolfvoyage: "You are the sky lit realms that rain over a glorious field, And the beacon of my cup from whence love spills. You are the covenant of each breath I take, And the resident that attributes to my ascendants fate." I am rapidly become an avid fan of your writing. It is eloquent. .....jo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The only thing louder than this whisper, is the beating of the heart that hears it. TD |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
quote: The most romantic words I've read in a long time. Your poetic gift is a wonder to read. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Simply beautiful. Chris |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Came back for another glide on the wings of a notable skywanderer... Enjoyed so much! TD |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You leave me breathless~ ~ARH Definitely my favorite of yours~ Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
your writing is breathtaking~ and I love the style in which you write, it is truly a long forgotten art. You sir, are a talent I am so glad that we get to share. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ravenwolfvoyager, A flower wrapped within a flower, enjoyed the read. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I was going to say that I wasn't sure how long you have been here nor where you came from, but indeed, you have been around for a month....where have I been? Thank you for making me take notice... Your writing is unique and very romantic... I shall be watching for you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whoa...very rich piece, a well done write |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is so beautifully romantic with the classical glitter to it, sweet friend, you have the grace of what defined chivalry and you carry it on respectedly, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This one would make any girl blush.... Wow!!!! LOVED THIS!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
wonderous and soothing to the spirit, this one |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Jeff I also had to come back and drink in your beautiful words of love and romance. Now that I've had my fix, I'm more than happy. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
well I agree with all that has been said...what a perfect fit to these pages...and your talent is stunning ~*~ In your light I learn how to love In your beauty how to make poems You dance inside my chest where no one sees you and that sight becomes art |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautifully written, as always! |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Yep...it's official...you are destined for greatness, dear One. As glorious as all of the accolades are, they dim in comparison to your talent and skill. Simply...thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A beautiful piece of writing, looks like you have all the ladies swooning here, run for cover! LOL - I am hoping you do more of these as I think I said before I love the style of your work, and it suits period writing so well. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Came back for another read, Jeff.... and to give you another page started.  Just beautiful writing, Sir. |
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