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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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0 posted 2004-01-20 02:47 PM


I wrote a poem and I lost it years ago
Maybe I am taking a ghost for a walk

Do we still exercise Ghosts
Or do they have their own Gym

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trees pass a message to me
stark staring entwined
I dont mind the message
I remember all the time

Just before christmas
walking by a stall
there hung the mistletoe
by a grocers awn

ing
my body left itself
my thoughts were in between
my eyes were flashing ready
yours were running
go

and go and go and go
olympics were your target
starting gun
wasn't firing blanks
and the yards are now mine

if you think of me
remember how I looked

if you think of me
remember what you took

Now I walk amongst the trees
looking stark and bare
Now my words are chosen

Do I want you there

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Terrina
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 166
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1 posted 2004-01-20 02:48 PM


Now my words are chosen....

I love that.
Thanks for finding this gem

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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2 posted 2004-01-20 02:56 PM


Now I walk amongst the trees
looking stark and bare
Now my words are chosen

Do I want you there


well I most definately have been asking myself this very question lately and can really relate to this.  Very well done.

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