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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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I've lost. A gambler, spent, holding my breath as losers often do. So much owing but my soul wont fetch much on the black market. And too much time has been borrowed knowing "sorry" has dropped in value. I'll repay someday the way liars often do with broken promises and years old faded schemes. The begger I'll always be cheating at the game forever holding my hand out in need from you. But in my shame my poverty, my plight im sure we could strike a deal Please come and reclaim. (this is my attempt at an apology that may never be heard) Someday I'll fly, Someday I'll soar, Someday I'll be So damn much more Cause I'm bigger than my body Gives me credit for. ~John Mayer |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Dawn~ Very nicely done... and might I add, what a fine picture! You are one beautiful woman. "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good write i hope the one that needs to read this from you does !! bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sometimes its enough the apology is made to ourselves. welcome back to poetry land Dawn. How foolish must man be, not to be impressed by mountains and trees |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
the apology, even if never read by others, when comes from the heart is enough. welcome to Passions! |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
This is outstanding, and oh so true. Sorry has lost it's value. I believe that, we throw it around. But I believe it is meant here. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The begger I'll always be cheating at the game forever holding my hand out in need from you. wonderful..there are those of us who always are in hopes that "forgiven" never becomes an obsolete word. hugs M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well. as an apology.. it seems heartfelt.. I hope it reaches who it is intended for |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Susan: *blush* thank you so much for that little suprising compliment...very uplifting! bernie: even if that person never see's my apology, im so glad you could make it! thank you for visiting my little box, and making me smile Janet Marie: you are a legend, and having you here is a lovely thing indeed! and thank you for the wisdom, though i may be slow in learning....gentle spirit: your name suits you perfectly! thank you so much! Terrina: thank you, i so glad you understand! Maureen: *sigh*, even if im not forgiven, i just had to shout out that i was wrong! i suppose the rest is up to destiny... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) With a heart as sensitive that can feel as yours, I certainly hope you are forgiven as lies and words leave scars but it doesn't mean one can't get their apology accepted, God Bless You, I send support angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dawn, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Sometimes it's what is written in your heart and you've clearly made an amends through this outstanding write. I sincerely enjoyed this. Thank you. |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
one of the best apologies I've ever heard. Because it was so honest and, as was said, heartfelt. Beautifully written. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Honest words of apology...thank you for sharing this, and I indeed hope the intended recieves your message. Patricia |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
heard or unheard, your voice rings true...~C |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful work... and whether the intended recipient reads these words or not, I hope they hear your heart. *S* Welcome to Passions! *S* |
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