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ctowen
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0 posted 2004-01-20 12:12 PM


sleepless
     turning thoughts
     burning moments
     trying endless knots

heavy
     eyes grow
     searching for you
     in a dreamy glow

deeply
     I find you
     behind my eyes
     wear your touch I know

restless
     reaching out
     slipping the knots
     I hear your heart's shout ...

waking
     I find you
     I feel your hold

     living this dream told


One's outlook can be another's expression.
  

© Copyright 2004 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2004-01-20 12:16 PM


I know the sleepless nights, have had my share,

deeply
     I find you
     behind my eyes
     wear your touch I know

I know this as well, seems as of late though, its is lost in a dream somewhere.....hugssss

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2004-01-20 12:31 PM



waking
     I find you
     I feel your hold

     living this dream told

this is good, isnt it? living the dream,
dont kick her out of bed just yet

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-01-20 12:35 PM


wow

a soft hold and dance

iliana
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4 posted 2004-01-20 09:25 PM


"heavy
     eyes grow
     searching for you
     in a dreamy glow"

Nice!  

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just out of reach
5 posted 2004-01-20 09:26 PM


Very, very nice Craig. hugs, Chris
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2004-01-22 02:57 PM


Dreaming sweet has become your trademark.
Really nice writing Craig~

richard taylor
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7 posted 2004-01-22 03:16 PM


this is excellent and I meen that.
well done
richard.

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