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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2004-01-20 12:07 PM



Playing ping-pong with
the telephone poles,

they look in,touching
base with me, between
the stark flourecence
of the 9 - 5,

freedom at a distance,
they toy with me,as
they taunt and inspire,

while i lose and find
myself, tossing thoughts
to them, laced among the
breadcrumbs, as i'm winged
within the frosted glass.

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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT
1 posted 2004-01-20 12:15 PM


just another day ....

     hope you are at least staying warm!

        have a good lunch!    *S

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2004-01-20 12:27 PM


yes lunch is in the library right now
on a cold icey january day

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-01-20 12:33 PM


a glance from the eyes of your life...beautifully presented
Ravenwolfvoyager
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4 posted 2004-01-20 05:18 PM


You've capture the essence of another great write!! You write wonderfully!!
bklynboy
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florida
5 posted 2004-01-20 06:13 PM


I dont get it?
garysgirl
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6 posted 2004-01-20 06:25 PM


Hi Michele  
I hope that you had a good lunch,
and I'm glad that you took time to write us a poem.  Thanks.
Ethel

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
7 posted 2004-01-20 06:31 PM


Always amazing.
choshi
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since 2004-01-01
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8 posted 2004-01-21 09:05 AM


"...while i lose and find
myself, tossing thoughts
to them, laced among the
breadcrumbs, as i'm winged
within the frosted glass...."

Such a mix of losing and finding simultaneously, so much revealed in the span of one moment...quirky and beautiful  ~C

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
9 posted 2004-01-21 01:17 PM


Ping pong anyone??  
You are such a fine poetess,
and always you leave me smiling.


Hugs girlie~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
10 posted 2004-01-21 01:30 PM


love you too girlie,
and all
just checking in lunctime in the lib again

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