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Your Handsome Mind
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Your Handsome Mind |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
For a moment you were mine and I’ll cherish that time. Lying if I said it meant less than it did. Kid myself by thinking I could have you again. Grin though as I think of the smile in your eyes Surprised, of course, that my lips were that soft Caught off guard by my confidence, And I, by your intelligence. I truly believe that makes a man. I’m a fan my dear, of your handsome mind. The kind that teaches but never preaches, I beseech you. I want to keep you. The attitude of a gifter with much to give, Chivalry is not dead in you. Compliments run through to me. You see me responding loud and clear, I can see that much from here. Let me look at you, In case I never see you again. Lying if I said it meant less than it did. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Well done!  "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Much enjoyed and very well done, no improvement needed! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
This is fantastic!! Sounds like a very special guy and a lucky one at that to have the admiration of you  Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
Thank you all. Specially you thunder |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd! I've been there and done that! What an inspiring write! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Terrina, this was very much enjoyed by me. Good one! |
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