Re-forged (another Villanelle)

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Open Poetry #30

Re-forged (another Villanelle)

Margot
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since 2003-10-04

Posts 154

0 posted 2003-11-23 12:06 PM

Re-forged (a Villanelle)

Re-forged in the fiery furnace heat
Two wounded hearts do mend
Walk the path where two souls meet

Blessing with tears my life complete
Raised up with faith, transcend
Re-forged in the fiery furnace heat

Finding the garden of retreat
In the heart of my truest friend
Walk the path where two souls meet

We were apart, our world discrete
Two hearts now melt and blend
Re-forged in the fiery furnace heat

Tender the words , the thoughts so sweet
Held where the bough does bend
Walk the path where two souls meet

Drink of love's cup we are replete
Though the world can't comprehend
Re-forged in the fiery furnace heat
Walk the path where two souls meet

Margot/23Nov03

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-11-23 12:15 PM

Margot, you are sooooooo good at writing villanelles! Only the brave of heart attempt writing them! Enjoyed, BRAVE Heart! lol

Warm hugs,
EA

Margot
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since 2003-10-04

Posts 154

2 posted 2003-11-23 12:19 PM

EA,

Thank you, the first stanza came while I was busy with something else earlier this morning and has been tickling my mind since then.

Margot

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
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3 posted 2003-11-23 12:24 PM

enjoyed

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-11-24 03:03 AM

I don't know how you do it, but I'm amazed!

Margot
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since 2003-10-04

Posts 154

5 posted 2003-11-24 07:21 AM

vandana & passing shadows,

Thank you very much

Margot

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

6 posted 2003-11-25 09:38 PM

Margot,
This was indeed a treat. Your subject is strong ( obviously ), your meter, while it does seem to fluctuate, remains intact throughout. Very well crafted in my opinion.
Doc

icequeen
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since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

7 posted 2003-11-25 10:00 PM

Excellent... this is a form I don't even attempt - I leave it to experts such as you!

Caroline

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

Margot
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since 2003-10-04

Posts 154

8 posted 2003-11-26 06:32 PM

DrMoose & Caroline,

Thank you very much

Margot

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