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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
You… are the sparkling ocean water under the newly risen sun are the cardinal so red sitting on the branch outside my window are the field of white covered with freshly fallen snow are the loving innocence of the child who sleeps I thought of you today and remembered how much I miss you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh...I can feel the ache  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
...so sweetly written...gently... |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
You packed alot into this,good work inded Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
my mind was filled with beautiful thoughts...splendid! |
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tavern wench Junior Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 44 |
nature brings beautiful thoughts to mind. how wonderful this person must be. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
awww..geez...this is sad... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Nicley written, Youngster. I can see that you are feeling blue. |
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