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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-01-18 03:37 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * *

You are the bird of my paradise
The wind beneath my wings
You are the colors of the rainbow
And all the different shades it brings

You are the river in my dreams
The burning embers in my fire
The whisper through the trees
It is your love my heart desires

The light of my life
The spring in my step
The jewel in my crown
The paint in my palette

You are the reason for my happiness
Your love lifts me high above
My life has been enriched
For it's been touched by your love

* * *

"Love is the master of all ceremonies"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-01-18 03:39 PM


Beautiful and complete in its expression!  .......hugs to you!
exhale
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Alberta,Canada
2 posted 2004-01-18 03:41 PM


thats was beautifull
good write

Steve Motuel
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Bergen auf Ruegen, Germany
3 posted 2004-01-18 03:59 PM


Well done Sue

This is a great example of a perfect Sueism.  Love is a wonderful thing and being able to express it in this way shows that you hold it true to your heart!

Hugs
Steve

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4 posted 2004-01-18 04:15 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, and you are a special friend to us all who we all love so much and wish happiness for always! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

DavePage
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5 posted 2004-01-18 04:16 PM


Very nice one

dave

Margherita
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6 posted 2004-01-18 05:50 PM


Refreshingly beautiful.
Love, Margherita

KristieSue
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7 posted 2004-01-18 08:46 PM


You are...wonderful with words :-)

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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