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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

0 posted 2004-01-18 11:29 AM

know this

my heart is
a window

and this
candle...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-01-18 11:44 AM

...glows.

Excellent imagery!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-01-18 11:44 AM

Awesome Ed!
TD

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2004-01-18 11:46 AM

Smiling at this one, Ed. Indeed you do hold light...I've seen it often in your poetry.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-01-18 11:51 AM

glowing

well done in a few words

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-01-18 12:08 PM

Ed~

This write gives me *happy*~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2004-01-18 12:44 PM

... a beautiful invitation to enter your heart.
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-01-18 12:45 PM

just beautiful...

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2004-01-18 01:18 PM

Perfect.

Eric

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2004-01-18 03:02 PM

and this candle -- More, more, please!

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

10 posted 2004-01-18 03:09 PM

yes, please, more!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

11 posted 2004-01-18 03:24 PM

RatL.

  Thanks for the candle, Ratleader.  It is always good to look into the heart.
  (CTS, changing the subject, you lost me with your response on my Mudman poem.  Care to clarify in an e-mail if I can figure out how to access it?)
  Very nice, simple write that says so much!

                 Thanks,
                       ~Sadelite~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2004-01-18 08:42 PM

Loving this view from the window!

You be the man, Ratleader~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2004-01-18 11:54 PM

I've studied your poems and still have no idea how you paint a vivid scene that so pleases the senses and touches the heart in just 10 words... but that's okay. *S* You write 'em, I'll enjoy. *S* Beautiful work!

Greeneyes