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The In-between |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The In-between What we were and what we are Is a bird of lives bizarre Each a moment born a scene And lost to us the in-between There is no point of true begin Or if there is it’s much too thin It starts within a vague insist And dies within the vague of mist I cannot pin the point of true It stays with me like newborn dew But newborn dew is the prime The beginning and end of time And so I too, a points insist Will disappear into the mist And cannot say the I or were The in-between is all a blur And laughter is my jet of hub Escape past old Beelzebub |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Seymour, I love this and especially It stays with me like newborn dew To life and love there is no end and no beginning I think, it just IS, but we are stuck to our earthly views. Never mind the mist, it always dissolves. Yes let's escape past the Beelzebub! Have a wonderful Sunday. Love, Margherita  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy I liked the last two lines the best. He'll never catch you!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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richard taylor Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 136 |
This is good writing Seymour, I enjoyed it. regards Richard. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Two smiles... for the inbetween times...  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Morning Seymour my friend! Interesting write this wintery Sunday. Enjoyed. Where is Enchantress with the tea? Blueberry muffins are ready! Hugs, Chris  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And so I too, a points insist Will disappear into the mist And cannot say the I or were The in-between is all a blur And laughter is my jet of hub Escape past old Beelzebub ========================= thats cuz ole Beelzebub cant keep up with Randy.  Your poetry is the insist that will carry you beyond the mist. Get my gist?  LOL   How foolish must man be, not to be impressed by mountains and trees |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita You are to me of new born dew. Hugs scorpio Thank you my friend. I thank you richard. Sunshine, and two for you.Chris, Thank you dear heart. JM, My cold has dampened Randys bold Perhaps it is the wage of old. Perhaps it is a sneeze away Perhaps the sun has turned to gray. So winkiewinkie from your stinky |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm here...I'm here...I'm late I know... But I did read this wonderful piece and... just brewing a fresh pot. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you dear I need your tea. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
grins |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
every poem is a cup of nectar... be well soon, sy. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Once again...exceptional writing. Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Grins back. Thank you. Serenity, Thank you sweet. Ericc Thank you for the read and reply. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I think you are right about laughter! hugs to you, Seymour. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Hugs back and thank you. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Much to ponder here, Sy... Seems everything's a paradox, ultimately, and laughter is the one thing (except for faith, maybe?) that keeps us "sane"... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK I think you're right, stay well. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Seymour... I really like this one...but, then...I pretty much like everything you write! Uhh...but, the in-between times are sooooo much fun! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Seymour, and good evening. Sorry I'm so late today....but it was a good evening read as well as morning.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jaicie114 Once again love and light back and thank you. Ethel, As they say better late then never. LOL |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sy, I really liked your title and reflection. It left me thinking... Thank you for sharing, Sadelite |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadelite You are a welcome audience. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
you are great this is a lovely story Kindly, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
redheart, I thank you so much. |
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