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Open Poetry #30

"Yes or no?"

Laoha
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since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

0 posted 2004-01-18 01:56 AM

"Yes or no?"

"I don't have to tell you,
but you still will know
that I love you.
Yes ?
or no?"

You nodded your head,
and then
said no.

1/17/2004

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Energy of the sun
Nutritions of the earth
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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1 posted 2004-01-18 02:26 AM

confusing...huh?

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-01-18 02:34 AM

I like this, I really do

Dave

Laoha
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

3 posted 2004-01-18 04:52 AM

Talking to my kids today gave me the idea to write this piece. I take it to a much broader sense.

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2004-01-18 09:20 AM

Good write
Funny how most of the answers we get in life, are yes and no,,,,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

5 posted 2004-01-18 10:36 AM

This one has an unexpected punch to it. I like the way it drips on the page to a sudden conclusion.

McLean

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