Whole Lot of Kissing I'm Missing

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Open Poetry #30

Whole Lot of Kissing I'm Missing

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-01-17 11:16 PM

Whole Lot of Kissing I'm Missing

Una Fiona don't tease me anymore.
I want what I want,
lets even the score.
Your tennis dress
is way too short,
and the top is
too tight.
How can I win when
you're such a delight.
You promised a kiss
if I could win,
but you're way to sexy,
I'm not sure if I can.
If you'd give me
ten points, perhaps
victory would be mine.
Please let me Fiona,
win a kiss
this time.

JamesLee
January16
2004

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

1 posted 2004-01-18 12:16 PM

Personally, this seems to fit the decorum of another forum, one which caters to a more risky, adult, sports-oriented one...hahaha! Teasing. This is whimsical and a delight to read. Not too heavy.

McLean

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2004-01-18 08:41 PM

(smiles) Yay! I love this, sweet friend, this is beautifully passionate, God Bless You, your fantasies are always so colorful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-01-18 08:53 PM

James -- I just loved this one!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-01-18 08:58 PM

Enjoyed this light hearted write James.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

5 posted 2004-01-18 09:09 PM

Oh my, James...

I thought Fiona was history...and that you knew she would break your heart! And, here you go again....tsk, tsk, tsk

But, this is a silky write!!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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