Open Poetry #30 |
No Rhyme Or Reason |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Josephine Wall * * * I can see no rhyme or reason As to how I came to write But words for me flow freely Often in the dead of night I have no magic formula Words flow like blood through a vein I am inspired by other writers Whose friendship is my gain Why is it that I rhyme? It seems to happen with such ease I feel the more that I write The more I'm eager to please I may write of fact or fiction It can be difficult to tell But from all that I have written I feel you know me very well You've held my hand in grief At the depth of my despair You've comforted me in sadness Your words show how much you care 'tho there is distance between us I feel you are always close at heart Your words to me speak volumes Making us not so far apart I look back over my writing And I see how much I've grown As I've opened up my heart There is so much that I have shown I continue on my journey With your friendship close at hand And like the conductor of an orchestra I let my heart take full command * * * "The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand nor the kindly smile nor the joy of companionship. It is the spirited inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone else believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship" I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (01-18-2004 12:15 AM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"I have no magic formula Words flow like blood through a vein I am inspired by other writers Whose friendship is my gain" Sue -- that is a two-way street! I could not have penned my own thoughts about this matter better than this -- it's like you read my mind! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I look back over my writing And I see how much I've grown As I've opened up my heart There is so much that I have shown I continue on this marvellous journey With your friendship close at hand And like the conductor of an orchestra I let my heart take full command Sue, this is so true for me, too. Ethel |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Brilliant as usual Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just how it is, indeed! |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Remarkable job on this one, Sue. Beautiful! Isn't it neat how writing through this media can be very healing and rewarding? Many here, I'm sure, are nodding their heads in agreement with you as they read your perfectly fitting words. McLean |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Your writing was just meant to be and also for you to be a member of Passions. We have all gained from knowing you and I know you have gained from the association. You write so beautifully and I still feel that gift came from your father. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Your poetry and friendship is special to us all and every poem you post, you continue to grow with your golden heart and the friendship deepens with understanding the beautiful YOU! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all so much for your replies. You are the exact people I speak of, some of which have been with me since I first began three years ago. I truly believe that although we are far in distance our words keep us close at heart. I cherish each and every one of the friendships I have made here at PIP and it is a place where I find comfort, inspiration and above all.....love. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sue, this was wonderful writing, you have so much improved over the time that I have seen, your words bring song to the heart as your friendship brings a smile. Thank you for sending this poem, it was so much enjoyed, Passions is truly the place to be for peace and the meeting of souls. Write on my friend and make us all proud, till again. Happy writing with your heart. Sincerely Rick |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hi Rick It is always so nice to hear from you and thank you for taking the time to comment. Your words are always so much appreciated. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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