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Ben
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0 posted 2004-01-17 01:04 AM



A bleak decay of dignity from the outside
While the glass of life sits shattered deep inside
Tearing the flesh from within
He be the spectator of social sin
His filth now a tattooed engravement
As the corroded cup sits on the pavement
Blindly gazing into passing shadows
But never to intrude on congested windows
He be begging for someone to turn on the light
While clinging to the illusion of his liberal right

A well played beauty charade from the outside
While a self-righteous persona sits trapped deep inside
Wealth tearing out consciousness from within
She be a pawn of social sin
Her existence now a hollow engravement
As she passes the corroded cup on the pavement
A smouldering soul amongst a mass of shadows
Envisioning her reflection upon imperial windows
She be begging for someone to turn out the light
While clinging to the illusion of her eminent right


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1 posted 2004-01-17 09:33 AM


Ben~
A well-laid piece ... thought provoking and layered in caring~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><
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