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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2004-01-17 09:28 AM

In life's giving
    love is a gift
  such worth living

but a time comes
    when hearts grow old
  a new beat drums

stale blood breathing
    changing colour
  moments theiving

once lifeless blues
    feeling the air
  take on red hues

thy scarlet will
    for you, my love
  my heart bleeds still

pleasures follow
    emptying was
  leaving hollow

but not for long
   another breath
  the weak 'comes strong

in love we learn
    there must be two
  for it to yearn

and now these hearts
    must face and bare
  their broken parts

thy scarlet will
    for true, my love
  such hearts bleed still

One's outlook can be another's expression.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-01-17 10:36 AM

CTOwen~

'in love we learn
there must be two
for it to yearn'

Oh my ... this is soooooooooooo good~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-01-17 01:24 PM

Craig, your poetry is not read nearly enough...this is awesome! an awesome piece!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2004-01-17 01:57 PM

powerfully painful
agonized aching

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2004-01-17 01:59 PM

in love we learn
there must be two
for it to yearn

So true this is, Craig....
it takes two wanting it to work.

richard taylor
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 136

5 posted 2004-01-17 02:43 PM

Hi Ctowen,
I agree with the other replies, this is good.
well done.
regards Richard.

Laoha
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

6 posted 2004-01-18 05:10 AM

This is deep, really deep. My respect.

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

7 posted 2004-01-18 06:04 AM

is it true that blood is actually blue in color until it "hits" the air, and that it is oxygen that turns it red? Just wondering. If it's true, that has to be one of the neatest wonders. Kind of like adding water to kool-aid powder.

You write brought many thoughts to mind.

McLean

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