Open Poetry #30 |
Within Inches |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Within Inches fluid as always you splash upon me leaving me breathless many times before I cut through fog just to touch the edge of you today being no different here in the middle of winter I reach for your banks |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Today, you've reached me (although that is not what I believe you meant)! Great fluency! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic Helen! So good to see you posting again. Be well. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
as always.. a beautiful write.. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Power in this imagery...I love it for its dimensions, but I'd pack it into my library for the imagery alone...in it goes! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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Kristin Eve Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 89On, Canada |
I love this: "fluid as always you splash upon me" I am a fan. i really like your style. "Who you are speaks so loudly...I can hardly hear what you are saying" |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
like the tidal flow I reach for the shore of you withdrawing again Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Superb allegory!! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
fluid as always you splash upon me leaving me breathless many times before I cut through fog just to touch the edge of you Oh my, Helen, what beautiful thoughts this brought to my mind of my Love and me. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is so beautifully romantic, sweet friend, may crystals always fill the sands at the bank of your heart, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Cutting through the fog to touch the edge! Mmmm, hmmmm, that's a nice way to go about it. Love your style, Helen~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, You are the best. So much packed into such few words. I'll always have a soft spot for my "die hard" romantic. Peace and health. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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