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Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956


0 posted 2004-01-16 10:57 AM


I just had to share how awesome he is...

Your very being beneath your bones
I sensed when I held you
  
In amazement
    I realized that I love the spirit, the person within you

We create our lives together,
  yet mine is still my own
    
You live your dream and it doesn't steal mine
      Nor does it steal you from me

I look at you so often -
  Your face has become more familiar to me
Than my own

You are a strong and gentle spirit beneath your    
   bones

You are breathtakingly beautiful

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Terrina
Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166
California
1 posted 2004-01-16 11:25 AM


Wow,
How lucky you are to feel that way about someone and have them return the favor.
Thank you so much for sharing.

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
2 posted 2004-01-16 11:31 AM


Passionate, and touching.Nice job.

Jason

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

3 posted 2004-01-16 05:59 PM


Thanks...He would never consider describing himself this way- but its the person who I see.
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