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My Hero
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My Hero |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania 
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My Hero My hero,,,,rides no steed... has slain not one dragon... A suit of armour? not in his wardrobe... My hero weilds not a sword.. yet his wit is twice as sharp. My hero always rescues me,,,, from my worst of enimies,,,, Myself Never far from my hearts call.. in my eyes,,, He's 10 feet tall... He's brave, valiant, and true I call my hero's name,, a song to my soul I claim not to worship from afar all know, I am open in my praise He's my hero... no flaws in him No weaknesses shear perfection is my hero... says me I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
As a Chinese saying, "The loved is pefect in the lovers' eyes." Enjoyed it! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good write  bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Thank you Laoha and Bernie for you possitive feedback.....Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Might his name be Mike? Your love is sweet. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
You know it copperbell! Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Very nice. An honest, true love is so much better than a fairy tale. And there are more important things in a person than being tall and powerful - like goodness and kindness. I liked this. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Brava, Michelle. Good write! |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
To endless and iliana,,,,,, thank you much,,,*with as graceful a curtsey as I can muster* Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Michelle, This was great! Much enjoyed ~Sadelite~ My hero weilds not a sword.. yet his wit is twice as sharp. My hero always rescues me,,,, from my worst of enimies,,,, Myself |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Thank you satelite Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
What a worthless bunch of tripe, this so called poem is.... And this "Mike" cat?? I'll bet he's a total punk, and completely worthless at that... Oh, wait... I'll be seeing you this week, won't I???? hmmmmmm......... GREAT write!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! You are SOOOOOOO lucky to have him!!!! lol Seriously, Sweets, it's a decent write. Cause in my dreams it's always there |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Ringo,,,you so need a beating,,, Love you too Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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