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I Will Write of You...
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I Will Write of You... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I Will Write of You… You, a unique individual, capable of many fine acts ~ looking beyond your own soul and taking on several tasks… I have often read your words so admiring your writing in languages I understand, and so often find, inviting…. Ofttimes you wax poetic and kind other times you speak your mind, then you gaze and glance romantic then you will veer and write semantic. How I envy your flutter-by moments as you cause slight tremors of heart in that winsome, carefree way of yours ~ indeed, a lovely and practiced art. But what causes me to stop and read along fine lines is the sincerity that you impart, and the care of it, refined… One might pen, and one may write, others wax philosophically but when one wears a heart on sleeve then I would say, please call on me Call on me to answer true call on me to write to you call on me to whisper yes and savor this written caress So you have asked I write of you… It stands above, in ink of blue... ~*~ Slightly revised from 2001 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine This is as bright as the sunshine of your name.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done K |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Thank you, Gentle Men...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write to someone special Karilea... Love this one! ~Morning hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
A pure reading enjoyment. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Of me??? lil ole me??? Im so touched  Good morning Poetess Sun...this is one of my faves of yours. Nature poets can't walk across the backyard without tripping over an epiphany. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
darn you good, wish i could do the same bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
WHOA! Im keeping this even if it wasn't written for me! I've never had a favorite of yours before, cuz I've loved them all, but my gawd... this is timeless.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed immensely...hope I spelled that right...James |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
For me, this could speak of so many. It is beautiful, and lifts the heart to see and look out, and feel the ink of another. I love it. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always so full of love and promise |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This made someone stand tall, no doubt of it! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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alan6501 Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 89PA |
Call on me to answer true call on me to write to you call on me to whisper yes and savor this written caress So you have asked I write of you… It stands above, in ink of blue... I love how this is written and how it flows. Specifically "call on me to whisper yes, and savor this written caress." Real pretty. |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
this was fantastic!! i always enjoy reading ur poems! ~samantha~ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
How touching...and beautiful! Eric |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sunshine, what a beautiful description of the poet, one we should all strive to be! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If you all received a thought of "could this be for me...?" you were correct. I admire all of you so much - and left this just for you. It always pleases me when you take time to read. Thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, your poetry shows the true colors of many who clutch the rainbows close to their hearts and taste the stars! (sigh) Love this, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Karilea - This is so very YOU, for all the love it shows. Beautiful writing from a beautiful heart. Hugs |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is beautiful...and your heart speaks so gently in this poem. OK...I admit you made me cry...but that's a good thing. Patricia |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
To say you are magic and talented would be an understatement They should take those words, frame them and sell them in every store Every man would buy them because they couldn't believe you were talking about someone else I thoroughly enjoyed this and I am printing it out Dave |
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Kristin Eve Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 89On, Canada |
this poem is so beautiful... i wish some one would write of me with the ardour that you have just captured. I love this. Thank you for sharing "By the time you finish reading this... |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
Please lend me a tissue, Patricia. I love this. It reminds me of someone who has just such a special talent. Y. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
How I envy your flutter-by moments as you cause slight tremors of heart in that winsome, carefree way of yours ~ indeed, a lovely and practiced art So true of your words... ~Sadie~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked this  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your write is so right....and a delight to the sight. Perfectly penned, poetess |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Do you realize I could almost hear you reciting that? Beautiful words. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You write so beautifully, Karilea. This person must be very special. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...I read this the other day and I was sure that I had replied...but just reading it again I see that I didn't...it's wonderful! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
And what a beautiful write you shared with us ! Charisma |
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poetically ghetto Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 100 |
this poem was written in the stars and happily welcomed a lot of good poetry written here thanx for letting loose |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very heartfelt and beauitful |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Very well done, inspired by somebody wonderful it sounds like  Very warm.Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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