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choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-01-16 06:42 AM

Is it your full day,
or an emptiness of heart?
The gap grows wider-
between nightfall and sunrise,
as falling snow continues.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2004-01-16 06:49 AM

Is it your full day,
or an emptiness of heart?
The gap grows wider-
between nightfall and sunrise,
as falling snow continues.

its all just filler
just a lot of eye candy
no thing sticks

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-01-16 09:59 AM

smooth,,,,easy,,,,I like
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2004-01-16 10:06 AM

Is it your full day,
or an emptiness of heart?
The gap grows wider-
between nightfall and sunrise,
as falling snow continues. ''
~~

Somewhat the Theory of Glass? half empty half full....and in between life continues
always leaving behind a sunrise and sunset...

beautiful!

Lauren~

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

4 posted 2004-01-16 03:20 PM

...this was touching, you said so much in so few lines that i cant even begin to tell you how much i like it!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-01-16 03:24 PM

Oh, if it were only this easy to communicate those feelings to the person (the distant one)! Your words are so meaningful!

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

6 posted 2004-01-18 10:06 AM

Wow, we got depth here, and not just of snow. Great stuff! You've got a gift for these little gems, no doubt about it.

~~J

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

7 posted 2004-01-20 09:27 AM

Somewhat the Theory of Glass? half empty half full....and in between life continues
always leaving behind a sunrise and sunset...

beautiful!

Lauren~

Your words inspire. Thank you Lauren, And:

Moons that rise and fall,
in continued oscillation;
waxing, waning-
'tween passing clouds and still stars,
how many more will we see?

~C

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

8 posted 2004-01-20 09:29 AM

Inkedgoddess: "its all just filler
just a lot of eye candy
no thing sticks"

After melting,
nothing left behind
but sticky fingers. ~C

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

9 posted 2004-01-20 09:30 AM

smooth,,,,easy,,,,I like
Michelle

Glad! ~C

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

10 posted 2004-01-20 09:31 AM

i cant even begin to tell you how much i like it!

Thank you Muted, but you just did...~C

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

11 posted 2004-01-20 09:33 AM

Oh, if it were only this easy to communicate those feelings to the person (the distant one)! Your words are so meaningful!

Oh, yes, Iliana, now that would be the mystery of the ages, ~C

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

12 posted 2004-01-20 09:35 AM

Wow, we got depth here, and not just of snow

Thank you for your warm and receptive comments James. ....~C

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