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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Hope fans fallow flames— Desolate promises prevail. Unspoken desires decay; Wishes wash away and erode Dreams into ashen abyss. Time cannot heal Nor experience reveal The dissolution of disappointments Predetermined by providence. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
steavenr...wow. This is a very dramatic piece of craftsmanship! Thank you for sharing. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
true...so true |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Time cannot heal Nor experience reveal The dissolution of disappointments The idea that "time heals all" doesnt always hold true,,,, well done Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You are a pro at getting points across! Good one. |
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chrissydome Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 73germany |
i love your use of alliteration! turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
jaicie, you are far too kind with your compliments passing shadows, thanks for taking time to read this one. I am usually expected to be the one who is eternally optimistic, but I needed the blue time on this one. Michelle… thanks for letting me vent some realism iliana, don’t know about the pro designation, but I thank you humbly chrissydome, awesome alliteration is always appreciated as awful alliteration ought to be avoided  |
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