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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-01-15 05:56 PM



your kisses
my promises
your lips
your touching

your look
your eyes
your smile
your thigh

the look
the time
how long
the sigh


my vow
your hair
you above me
who cared

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1 posted 2004-01-15 06:03 PM


lovely, even between the words....nice Dave...

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-01-15 07:28 PM


Nice...James
jaicie114
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3 posted 2004-01-15 10:11 PM


Dave...

I like this...a lot!  Thanks!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-01-18 04:33 PM


Thanks for the words

Dave

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