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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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She seeks the comfort of his scent the real of his skin She reaches for fulfillment of a void that can’t be found within He pulls her close and whispers of a beauty made from two He wraps his fingers in her hair gently giving lust, loves point of view She gasps in shock for a depth in life so far unknown She wraps herself around the whole of what has to her been shown Together secrets they impart breathing... rhythm of primal becomes… one beat of heart |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
lovely write susan bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write Susan... softly sensual..much enjoyed. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... it would seem being in love sits well on your muse... now, where is his? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Bernie and Nancy!  Ron~He has been "serving and protecting" for the last 3 days... "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good morning, Susan! This is really so good! Have a good day. ........jo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Jo! "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Sue, I can only aspire to write as well as you. That poem was really beautiful. I am working on a response. Give me a little bit of time. Your much better at this than me. ILY! Steve |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Awwww, this is so sweet. I love seeing people in love.....especially when both of them are. It's beautiful.  Oh, and I loved your poem, Susan. Ethel |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
Susan- I was going to say this is a perfect chick poem...but I see the guys like it just as well. It is beautiful and so sensual. Y |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
this was so good, i greatly enjoyed reading it! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh my... Pardon me by I think your love is showing, lady, and oh yes, it does look good on you.  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sensual and smoldering, very nice |
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Kristin Eve Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 89On, Canada |
i love the sexuality in this poem... and i think it has a very interesting title! I've been browsing for your poetry the last couple days...out of curiosity. I found what I expected from you... beautiful expression. Thanks for sharing! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very hot! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Sexy and well done.Love this. Jason |
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Singularity Junior Member
since 2004-01-16
Posts 10Sunny California |
Heavy stuff; both literally and literarily. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Beautiful passion and irony...~C |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
wonderful write Susan. Its good to see you so happy |
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