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First love |
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MrLove New Member
since 2004-01-14
Posts 2 |
I know how to ride a bike, or even fly a kite But kissing is even more natural With you i was stopped by fright Thinking of what could ever happen to us I didnt want to kiss, then loose all the trust I decided i could not live, one more moment alone I am where you live, and asked you to come home At that very second, i had doubt in my mind Not of the upcoming answer, but what you had to find We were so very close before this happened to be I told you i loved you, and you loved me That day i will remember Cherish throughout my life I could not live without, you in my life I realized what i was, and the way you are And noticed i was ungrateful and had gone to far But now i have changed, wont ever be the same My love expressed for you comes out in differant names |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done welcome to passions |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Sir! We certainly hope you enjoy yourself, look around the various forums, and get to know us as friendly folks of the poet's circle. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Welcome to this wonderful haven, MrLove. I think you'll fit in just fine! McLean |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. I was inspired by your write...misunderstandings and distance. The ending line was very mysterious. ThisDiamond |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi, and Welcome to Passions we are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family…. please check your email for a special greeting Kindly Greeneyes~  ~*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Welcome to Passions MrLove. Thank you for sharing with us. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome to Passions Bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
welcome to Passions...this is a wonderful place to release emotion and you can learn so much about yourself and others. I look forwards to reading more from you! Take a seat...look around and enjoy, I'm sure you'll love what you see! Take care, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
I echo everyone else's praise! and Welcome! Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Mr. Love -- do I know you? If I don't, you certainly have reminded me of my husband's courtship. We were friends before we dated -- the romantic things was a difficult bridge to cross -- as you have outlined very well above. Enjoyed your writing. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions!  |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Welcome to Passions,,,, I was 31 years old, when I found my first real love,,,,,,he said the magic words to me first,,,,,your poem reflects the fears in his eyes that night,,,,,not of my words,,,but,,,of what would happen,,,, very well written,,,,, take care Michelle (p.s., I'll be 33 in may,,,and I still marvel at the wonderous sight of my first love next to me each morning) I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Welcome to PIP Mrlove~from one romantic poet to another.... ~ARH  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! In the midst of winter.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) Yay! You have come to the right place as this is just the place to express all the names of love and all other kinds of emotions in this special family, God Bless You, this is a beautiful debut! Welcome to Passions, sweet MrLove, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet MrLove, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This poem has played a haunting tune to me...and I came back to seek it. There is no greater healing than the truth told...in all of its basic and beautiful essence. Hope you tell her this... TD |
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