Open Poetry #30 |
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Feather, a tale |
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Keth Junior Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 14 |
Where feathers may guide me Fortuna offers silky boots Tomorrow there, a silent wind Sweet scent of mornig roses Run, run! Don't hesitate Golden rays will embrace you Run, run! Time has called To follow you on drifting blooms Realms of dawning skies await Yesterday past, a warm whisper Circles will be closed to doors Where feathers may guide me. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I L I K E Y O U R S T Y L E ! You've got a very nice voice, and I like what you say with it. You, I'll read for sure. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, A delightful read. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this reminded me of Forrest Gump as the same feather seemed to pass right on to his son, God Bless You, Happy Thanksgiving, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Keth, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-27-2003 04:25 PM).] |
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Blush Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 56Ky |
Its very different and unique I liked it a nice soft floating feathery feeling ![]() Nicely done BTW Nice to meet ya I am sorta new here and I just posted one also Do come by and see me won't you Blessings Susan~~~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Welcome Keth, I hope you enjoy being here, sorry the full version of your name is already taken. I like what you've written. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth, really good writing, your name gave me quite a start because Kethry, whom I always call Keth is my heart sister. And seeing your name I thought you were her for a moment, however your writing is entirely different so I won't be confused again. Really excellent writing I like your style is is very good. as always Mushy ![]() ![]() ![]() Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds but I can face the future with courage brave and bold Footprints In My Heart Kethry [This message has been edited by Marsha (11-28-2003 07:34 AM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Keth -- this was beautiful -- I'll be reading you. |
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