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Xonicx Junior Member
since 2004-01-14
Posts 20Vancouver, WA |
Rose A beautiful red rose to me Look at the beauty and you'll see See the love within the rose I nurture it and see how it grows? Everyday a bit beautiful then the day before My love for it, is evermore The rose is my world The rose is my girl I love thee so much I love thee's touch When I look in her eyes I see the rose inside Every year that will go by Every hour that we will cry Every minute we will share Every second we will care The pedals are delicate as in we must not lust The stem is our foundation of God in which we trust The water in which we need is our love All is made possible with the rose sent from above. Benjamin Allen Chapin Copyright ©2004 Benjamin Allen Chapin |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ben, a nice first poem. Look forward to reading more. Welcome to pip. |
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Xonicx Junior Member
since 2004-01-14
Posts 20Vancouver, WA |
thanks, glad to be here. -------------------------------- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome Bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Xonicx Junior Member
since 2004-01-14
Posts 20Vancouver, WA |
it's Ben.... -------------------------------- |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi, and Welcome to Passions we are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family…. please check your email for a special greeting Kindly Greeneyes~  ~*~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Ben, beautiful write...loved the imagery in this...Welcome to Passions/Pips. Hope you enjoy it here, a lot of wonderful people "roam" these pages of blue. Take care, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions In Poetry, Ben. I enjoyed reading your first post and look forward to more of your work.  Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (angel hugs) Awwwwwwwww, this is such a romantic and heartfelt debut, sweet friend, may this rose of love always bloom in the vase of your heart, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Benjamin, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benjamin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Yippie! Yippie! Welcome to the warmest posting place on the net! McLean |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
boy, are you in love! i believe love is one of the greatest inspirations a writer can have. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
The lady that is the subject of this write,,,,is very lucky indeed. Welcome to the PIP family Michelle |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS BEN! Very much enjoyed your first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Benjamin~  A lovely, lovely entrance you've made to the circle of poets and friends~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Welcome to Passions!!!! Nice Poem!!! Help you out??? Just write from your heart ALWAYZ!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
As you can tell, I like roses for imagery, as well. Yours was very meaningful! |
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