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Xonicx
Junior Member

since 2004-01-14

Posts 20
Vancouver, WA

0 posted 2004-01-14 01:13 AM

Rose
A beautiful red rose to me
Look at the beauty and you'll see
See the love within the rose
I nurture it and see how it grows?
Everyday a bit beautiful then the day before
My love for it, is evermore
The rose is my world
The rose is my girl
I love thee so much
I love thee's touch
When I look in her eyes
I see the rose inside
Every year that will go by
Every hour that we will cry
Every minute we will share
Every second we will care
The pedals are delicate as in we must not lust
The stem is our foundation of God in which we trust
The water in which we need is our love
All is made possible with the rose sent from above.

Benjamin Allen Chapin

Copyright ©2004 Benjamin Allen Chapin

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-01-14 01:23 AM

Ben, a nice first poem. Look forward to reading more. Welcome to pip.

Xonicx
Junior Member

since 2004-01-14

Posts 20
Vancouver, WA

2 posted 2004-01-14 01:30 AM

thanks, glad to be here.

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2004-01-14 11:22 PM

Nice writing...James

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

4 posted 2004-01-14 11:24 PM

Welcome

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Xonicx
Junior Member

since 2004-01-14

Posts 20
Vancouver, WA

5 posted 2004-01-15 01:27 AM

it's Ben....

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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2004-01-15 12:29 PM

Hi, and Welcome to Passions we are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

please check your email for a special greeting

Kindly

Greeneyes~

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

7 posted 2004-01-15 04:59 PM

Ben,

beautiful write...loved the imagery
in this...Welcome to Passions/Pips.
Hope you enjoy it here, a lot of
wonderful people "roam" these pages
of blue.
Take care,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2004-01-15 05:47 PM

Welcome to Passions In Poetry, Ben.
I enjoyed reading your first post and
look forward to more of your work.

Ethel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2004-01-17 06:33 PM

(angel hugs) Awwwwwwwww, this is such a romantic and heartfelt debut, sweet friend, may this rose of love always bloom in the vase of your heart, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Benjamin, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benjamin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

10 posted 2004-01-18 07:11 AM

Yippie! Yippie! Welcome to the warmest posting place on the net!

McLean

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

11 posted 2004-01-18 07:59 AM

boy, are you in love! i believe love is one of the greatest inspirations a writer can have.

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

12 posted 2004-01-18 08:57 AM

The lady that is the subject of this write,,,,is very lucky indeed.
Welcome to the PIP family
Michelle

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2004-01-18 11:45 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS BEN!
Very much enjoyed your first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2004-01-18 12:03 PM

Benjamin~

A lovely, lovely entrance you've made to the circle of poets and friends~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

15 posted 2004-01-18 09:38 PM

Welcome to Passions!!!!

Nice Poem!!!
Help you out???
Just write from your heart ALWAYZ!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

16 posted 2004-01-18 10:22 PM

As you can tell, I like roses for imagery, as well. Yours was very meaningful!

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