Open Poetry #30 |
The Cage |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The Cage I wove a cage of words and phrase To hold a thought within its maze And nailed this deem to sole my shoes To walk on greens and skies of blues And as I walked a rainbows bridge I came across a place of ridge And stared into a pool of hew And there I saw your image true. You beckoned me with smile and bliss And blew to me a hand blown kiss And asked that I come closer still To touch my lips to pool and spill Into the wile milieu of me And purr with you our spirits free Pick the flowers in our glean And play the lover of this scene And I, did fall beyond my heart And you became my counterpart. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
morning smiles, Sy...nice read M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A and for you this morn. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful morning read dear Sy! Have a wonderful Thanksgiving! Hugs~....oh and special tea today! ~ Happy Thanksgiving America! ~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You are a romantic Sy. Happy Thanksgiving!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tucking this into my knapsack... because I want to! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Now, this is lovely music for my ears. It has such rhythm, it is uplifting. It cheers me up. Thank you dear Seymour. Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Sunshine, scorpio and Margherita, So a I will enclose and may you all have the very best of this holiday. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Such a pretty flow of well chosen words....excellent! Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Eric, Thank you my friend. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And nailed this deem to sole my shoes To walk on greens and skies of blues And as I walked a rainbows bridge ============================= its lines like those that just make me smile at you and call you me King of Cool... you are just so groovy right ... down to the soles of your soul Into the wile milieu of me your milieu or mine? LOL Happy Turkey Day me sweet Sybabes... me and Randy just burnt the cake and now we are gonna see what damage we can do to the ham!! LOL |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you my dear. JM, I've written a poem named mist, I think you'll get a charge out of. I'll post it tomorrow. Don't eat too much, lucky Randy. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I wove a cage of words and phrase To hold a thought within its maze And nailed this deem to sole my shoes To walk on greens and skies of blues And as I walked a rainbows bridge I came across a place of ridge And stared into a pool of hew And there I saw your image true. You beckoned me with smile and bliss And blew to me a hand blown kiss And asked that I come closer still To touch my lips to pool and spill Into the wile milieu of me And purr with you our spirits free Pick the flowers in our glean And play the lover of this scene And I, did fall beyond my heart And you became my counterpart. ~ Without a doubt, that is one of the most beautiful poems that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. ~ Yet another Each line is a veritable poetic treasure. Blessings to you and yours this Day of Thankfulness. EA |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Once again, a beautiful write dear Seymour. I am late again...oh well...afternoon tea and apple turnovers? That is....if it doesn't spoil Thanksgiving dinner. hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh, you're good at those endings |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nicely done!
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You now have the permanent position of my Earth Angel. Have a happy |
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titch k Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 123 |
hi Seymour I am liking your writing style very much SMILE only having been here a short while already drawn to your verse Into the wile milieu of me And purr with you our spirits free Pick the flowers in our glean And play the lover of this scene And I, did fall beyond my heart And you became my counterpart. love Titch |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you sweetheart. have a good one. passing, Thank you love. ecrivan Thank you for the well done. Titch Thank you and have a happy holiday |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sey -- oh ........ my ............ gosh! ! ! This is fabulous -- I loved it! Just try to tell me, this did not make an impression on the right person! [This message has been edited by iliana (12-23-2003 11:13 PM).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Looks like you did it again, Sy....very cagey! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana LOL she never reads my stuff. Mike, Cagey or stagy, LOL |
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