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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
This ones very small and not so deep, but as i wrote it, it made me think... If only it was! If only love was warm and kind If only love was yours or mine If only love felt this way If only love was here to stay If only I had had the chance I could’ve saved that one last dance If only time hadn’t spared This once true love would not be dead If only love was warm and kind If only love was yours and mine Just have a think about this one. A lot of people say it brings memories back for them. See what it does for you. xoxLORxox |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
sorry my mistake xoxLORxox |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
love lost,,,is what comes to mind,,,, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
If only love would forever last You would not be a part of my past... this is great and most definitely a thought provoker... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Love IS warm and kind Love IS yours or mine Love DOES feel this way Love IS here to stay You DO have the chance To save that one last dance Time HAS spared This one true love ISN'T dead Love IS warm and kind Love IS yours and mine |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
wow, there are indeed a gazillion what if's in life. well written! you had me going back to memory lane for a moment. |
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Singularity Junior Member
since 2004-01-16
Posts 10Sunny California |
Hmm, reminds me of a lot of ex-girlfriends ;-) |
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