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ambrya_nell
Junior Member

since 2004-01-11

Posts 28
Ohio

0 posted 2004-01-14 12:11 PM

I've never lost control,
I've never felt so fierce
about wanting a touch
from someone I only knew
through dark whispers
in a darkly passionate room.

Someone I never recognized
by the light of day,
but always knew by the feel
of the passion inside
of a body i held for hours,
before it would walk away.

I'll never forget the feel
of another soul baring itself,
in my arms & on my lips
with whispers & sighs
that needded something
I could only return
in the dark,
as I closed my eyes.

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

1 posted 2004-01-14 12:24 PM

Goodness, I am blown away at this! You said it all so perfectly! This is wonderful!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2004-01-14 12:39 PM

There is such a person. Know it.

And write it as beautifully next time as you did this time. This is just excellent.

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Serra_Avatar
Member

since 2004-01-11

Posts 58

3 posted 2004-01-14 12:57 PM

Vivid x2

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2004-01-14 01:54 AM

wow,,,,,
I feel lucky tho,,,I wake up next to the man that makes me feel that way,,,,,
very passionate write
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-01-14 02:01 AM

You have really been busy! This really says it all and is defintely a PIP-one!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2004-01-14 11:43 AM

Beautiful work... welcome to Passions! *S*

ambrya_nell
Junior Member

since 2004-01-11

Posts 28
Ohio

7 posted 2004-01-14 06:51 PM

thanks everyone...
yes.. was quite busy a short while ago.... went through a big writing phase.. helped me cope with a lot...glad you all enjoyed this..

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