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Open Poetry #30

On _______...

Kristin Eve
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 89
On, Canada

0 posted 2004-01-13 04:25 PM

...is none.
(...is none)

A slim paper cut   flirts (a nick)
    On the knuckle of hope…
                    Rekindling
          the interior passion
                       Of life
-as it rolls on,
       and ends.
                              (Simultaneously ?)

MY divine-less hope holds fleetingly-fast.
                     MY chameleon thoughts
             Will not be harnessed or held
By the strength
of a supposed-immaculate leash.

I am
None
And all-
In tempo with a measureless time and space
Existing only inside myself-oneself-thyself

Behind the eyes of those who seek a findless truth,
Behind the hearts of those who snatch solace in a truthless find.

This soul does not live
Under the rule
Of multiple thumbs
that exist
on the hand
of a
fictitious god.

"Who you are speaks so loudly...I can hardly hear what you are saying"

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2004-01-13 04:36 PM

"Behind the eyes of those who seek a findless truth,
Behind the hearts of those who snatch solace in a truthless find."

Whew...what an effort to find my favorite lines....

I was speechless as I read and let each word, each sentence, find it's meaning within my head...

Excellent!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Kristin Eve
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 89
On, Canada

2 posted 2004-01-13 11:24 PM

thanks susan... your positive comments about all my poetry are greatly appreciated!

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