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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-01-13 04:13 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * *

This is purely a fictitious piece
of writing, although I have seen people
like this in the past and it is such a
sad thing to see.

* * *

I sit along a corridor
Just passing the time of day
These people come to see me
For just awhile they stay

I don't know who they are
But they seem to know me
My life seems so confusing
I'm not the man I used to be

I sit still just like a statue
But no one really seems to care
Blank faces are all around me
Into space is where they stare

I watch the flowers wilting
In the vase next to the door
Once bright colors are now fading
Soon their life will be no more

In God's waiting room I sit
A flight to heaven I await
Outstretched arms will welcome me
When I arrive at heaven's gate

* * *

"We are all angels with only one wing,
we can fly only by embracing each other"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Kristin Eve
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since 2004-01-13
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1 posted 2004-01-13 04:37 PM


I am young...and can only imagine what it is to let time simply pass as though my soul was imprisoned by the effects of this world...
Your poem paints a sad picture, but a picture nonetheless. It is beautiful because i can feel through it.
thank you for sharing this

"Who you are speaks so loudly...I can hardly hear what you are saying"

DavePage
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Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-01-13 04:46 PM


Sue

For me write something

Write words to blind the world

Write using knowledge that expands others to dream and seek to achieve

Your emotion your feelings your ideas

Write that will trip the fantasy

Dave

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-01-13 04:48 PM


So true and so very sad Sue...
Well done piece of reality.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
4 posted 2004-01-13 05:35 PM


Sue, this evoked my childhood memories of some of the patients I remember from a nursing home.  Good writing.
Ravenwolfvoyager
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Posts 326

5 posted 2004-01-13 06:20 PM


Hi Sue, this is an extraordinary write, and it captures a wonderful plight as we surcomb our spirits into the hereafter. You have a wonderful imagery of spiriting your words into each of your writes. Thank you Sue.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-01-13 06:23 PM


NIce writing...James
Suetang
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7 posted 2004-01-13 07:55 PM


I am so very grateful for your lovely comments.

Dave - thank you so much for your words.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

suthern
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8 posted 2004-01-14 11:07 AM


What a beautiful poem... I've always thought of that wait as sad... now I see it can be exalted as well. *S*
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9 posted 2004-01-14 02:17 PM


Sue...Sad, Touching and pure reality. We must help each other and never turn  away from those in need. Enjoyed very much...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

ice
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Pennsylvania
10 posted 2004-01-14 03:50 PM


Sue
You use a wide range of subjects in your poetry....I like that....:-)
and also your choice of pictures fit your poems perfectly....enjoyed this piece, even though the sad theme.
_______ice
  ><>

Goodknight
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11 posted 2004-01-22 09:55 PM


Sue - so well written and says so much - thanks - Paul
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