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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
This is the chat line It's all a blur who cares This is the nothing Loneliness is old Skip ahead in fun Some would like romance Let your body sway So the lights go dim You walk away alone Is the sadness hard Is the feeling bad Is the life you left For a moment Think what might have been Than those who might have been Sleep softly in your bed And face the morning sun You may not be a winner But you have just begun |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I don't know for sure but I think you wrote this about me  I see myself in there. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
don't ever think of my losses...just new chances to start over :-) Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
So the lights go dim You walk away alone Is the sadness hard Is the feeling bad Is the life you left For a moment Dave this is a great write. It is a ponder that I'm sure that most everyone has had to experience before. Excellent job Dave! Enjoyed this greatly. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Dave, you write questions everyone must ask -- and end with optimism -- a good write! |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Very intense write here, Dave...thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It is too easy to say the words To be the angry young, old Words filter through the words And realising That I might have written something I am forced to read The hot words Dave |
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